Medium-Sized Magnus walked through the enchanted glade. It was a perfect peaceful day, as it always was in the enchanted glade. Medium-Sized Magnus hated it, too quiet. He was looking for a wood-nymph to surprise, maybe that would liven things up.

He spied a wood-nymph by the enchanted pond, on the enchanted rock, in the shade of the enchanted tree. “Awrite hen.” He called to the wood-nymph, in an incongruous accent typical of his kind. “Want tae give jiggly wi’ it?”

The wood-nymph raised her head, topped by its crown of auburn hair, her milk white skin glowing in the soft light. She saw Medium-Sized Magnus, all two feet of blue tattoos, and said in a faint, week voice, “Fuck me please.”

“Ne’er swatch a gift cuddle in th’ gob.” Thought Medium-Sized Magnus, his thoughts also in an incomprehensible accent. He jumped to fulfill her wish; he landed between her conveniently open legs. His manhood had grown to its full ten inches. He’d been working on that surprise for the wood-nymphs, when your competition is centaurs, you need a surprise like that.

“Bang went saxpence!” Cried Medium-Sized Magnus, the battle cry of his kind. He manhood plunged alliteratively into her minge. A nice bushy minge thought Medium-Sized Magnus, these wood-nymphs definitely knew how to groom themselves. “Bang! Bang! Bang!” He cried as he thrust away, then finally “Aam comin’” He shot his piece into the wood-nymphs minge, then fell over backwards and was fast asleep.

Elrinvienne looked on in disgust at Medium-Sized Magnus’s behavior, she had been so desperate; she had stooped to bestiality. A succubus would not normally be seen dead in the presence of one of his kind. Though if he hadn’t come along at that precise moment, she may very well have been seen dead. She’d been dying of hunger; she was out of her element. Why she was in the enchanted glen, so far from her home, was unclear to her at that moment.

She was considering how long the meal would last her, when she heard the sounds of her natural prey. Instantly, her body changed. She grew slimmer, and taller, her hips lost their padding, though her breast remained wow! sized. Her hair grew blond and straightened, her minge became bare. She walked through the enchanted glade towards the sound of her prey.

At the edge of the trees she saw them, five preppies, they looked Eighteen to nineteen, the prime juicy age for her prey. They were bent over the hood of their car studying something. “I told you this wasn’t the way to Vegas.” Exclaimed one.

Elrinvienne stepped out from the shade of the tree, into the harsh desert sunlight, and asked, “Could you help me boys?”

And thus ensued the orgy.

Elrinvienne surveyed the wreckage of her meal as she scooped up and savored some stray come. The five naked sweaty bodies lay snoring on the ground. In times past, a succubus feeding would completely drain the energy out of her prey, thus killing them. Elrinvienne was a Californian, she was environmentally conscious and thought that was wasteful, so she only drained them to exhaustion, not death. They’d wake up in a few hours, sore in unexpected places with a memory they wouldn’t believe. Nor would any of their friends they’d try to tell of it.

Elrinvienne made her way back into the enchanted glade, back to the enchanted pool and sat on the enchanted rock in the shade of the enchanted tree. She felt vibrant, alive, full of energy. A big meal would do that, some species would have a post-prandial snooze, succubi would go to a club and dance all night on a meal like that. She found herself turning back into a wood-nymph again. ‘That fairy must be awake.’ she thought.

Indeed, she heard his voice, “Did ye loch yer snack?”

“I did indeed.” She replied, though ’snack’ hardly covered the feast she’d just had. Imagine chowing down on a basket full of happy meals, that’s what the snack was like to Elrinvienne.

“Ah thooght ye micht loch it.”

The fairy seemed to be taking credit for the appearance of the preppies. “That was your doing?”

“Och aye, it’s only fair, ye showed me sic’ a kindness.”

Understanding dawned on Elrinvienne, “You’re a luck fairy?”

“Ah am indeed.” The luck fairy repaid kindness shown to it by creating good fortune for the kind one. While Elrinvienne had only been concerned with feeding off the fairy, he had seen her invitation as a kindness.

“Could your luck extend to getting me back to civilization?”

“Ah dornt need luck fur ‘at. Ah can travel atween dimensions.” Elrinvienne had heard of the magical means of travel of some fairies, she felt hope growing. “Ah can tak’ ye tae Vegas. If ye tak’ me it jigging. Ah ken yer kin’ likes a guid ceilidh.”

Elrinvienne did indeed like a good party, she’d dearly missed them out here in the boonies; she was willing to even take the ill mannered fairy with her if that’s what it took. “OK, you have a deal, take me to Vegas and I’ll take you out clubbing.”

As soon as she said it, they were in Vegas. She kept her word, a demon can’t break a promise freely given, but by the end of the evening she’d found herself falling for the small blue fairy. Under his gruff exterior, hid a warm and funny soul.

They wanted to live a cliched happily ever after, but their’s was a forbidden love, they had to live in the shadows apart from their respective kinds. They didn’t care; they had each other.

 

Quaint little tale, quirky and amusing. Is Medium-Sized Magnus one of the Wee Free Men? I certainly hope so, he seems to bear resemblance tae one o'thur ilk, d'ye ken?

I spotted one or two minor puncuation errors but they are fairly irrelevant in a swift moving piece like this. Enjoyable stuff, well done.

 

Thanks @JayneyRedd

The luck fairy are based on the Nac Mac Feegle. No one's noticed previously. (They put in an appearance in Darkness Incorporated, this is a prequel to that.)

 

AYE, me thinks the luck fairy got lucky himself don' you? nice

 

What impresses me the most about this entry is how you were able to pack all of that into one story. Great work, Tony!

 

Thanks @pars001 Mutally beneficial, everyone wins.

Thanks @Norton X the orgy got squeezed to one line and taking off to Vegas was brief. This 1000 word thing is a challenge.

 

Great, I like this one a lot.

A few things left unsaid, like why either of them were there in the first place. But I loved the way she changed from disdain, through ally to love. (Could have done with a little more there at the end like you said.) That answers the question of why a sucubus and a luck fairy fall in love. Which reminds me I never commented on Darkness inc.

 

Thanks @stex I don't know why they're there either. But it set up the story. Maybe I need a pre-prequel.

 

Very talented

 

Again another great story submitted. Thanks

 

Welcome @BlueAmber If you want to comment on any of the other KAW 5 stories feel free.

 

Thanks @Redbeard1031 Thanks @BlueAmber looks like I have another fan.

I've been thinking "Adventures of Elrinvienne" (and Magnus) could make for interesting stories.

 

What Norton said! There seemed to be 3k of writing into a 1k story. That's a tough thing to do...good job!

 

The Good: This was interesting and had some fun to the story. The unlikely pairing of a fairy and a demon made the story original in nature.

The Bad: The heavy accent of the fairy made it a bit hard to follow.

The Ugly: This felt disjointed. With so few words available maybe some of them should have been spent on setting up the alternate reality. That is the problem with going very far off base in a very short story. It leaves the reader confused because they have not developed a frame of reference yet.

 

Thanks @ahorsewithnoname I'm wondering if the unhurried fairy story style with constant repitition makes it seem longer.

Thanks @Brootforce the accent is why the heroine reinterprets the fairy's words before she replies I was hoping that would get people through it. But I'm expecting comments about it.

The disjoint feeling may be because I laid the ground work in Darkness Incorporated. Not an excuse, I've complained about entries being part of a series myself.

 

Well I read this and just had to laugh.

Medium-Sized Magnus with the ten incher...that was hilarious to my mind for some strange reason.

Then I read the rest and found it to be quite well-written and something that would indeed be a great prequel to Darkness Inc, which you mentioned it is or even kinda is... I dunno, I confuckulate myself at times

 

Thanks @DeathsKnight Was supposed to be funny. It is a sequel.

 

Auto-correct is def out to get me, and I thought I'd turned it off. "Cuddle" in the fourth paragraph is supposed to be "cuddie".

I was thinking it made nonsense of the line, but I like the way it turned out.

 

BUMP

 

Another good story from you , I liked his gaelic type accent, it wasn't hard for me to follow , and loved his name
It was a good well written story and it stood alone well I thought.

Are these two John (from darkness inc) parents ? If I remember his parents were from a forbidden partnership of some kind, and I'm sure one of them was a luck fairy . and he was a strange kind of mixture of two different species.

It was really funny in parts and it kept me entertained you really squeezed on a lot in the to it. I didn't notice any mistakes either .

Thanks Tony , really enjoyable story , good luck . Luvs xx